You have some grammar/spelling issues but I like it.

TV producers should make a show where PAris Hilton and anyone else living off their parents' money have to "survive" on their own for __amount of time.

CLC

LMAO!! I actually just started skimming through this story while waiting for my laundry to finish, when I came across the silverchair part!! AH!! I LOVE THEM! I was so bummed when they went on hiatus and even more bummed when Daniel went and married Natalie Imbruglia!! **, the boy is mine!

But rejoice, for silverchair is recording another album!

And this story is hilarious!

Exclamation points!

Cute story. It actually sounds like something that happened to a friend of mine a few years ago...

Sadly enough, she went right back to her old ways when she finally had enough money...

Anyway, I like the way it's written, and the story has a point. good luck with everything.

Pax,~Julia

Oh, I like this.

The waiter's so... cool (for lack of creative and original words)! He's so hot and everything, and I love the way he's hitting on Alicia. I love the way you ended it too.

I looked down at my lobster. Lobster, I'm too excited by this. I reached for my drink and noticed that he had neatly placed a ripe red maraschino cherry on the brim of my frosted glass.

My god. I'm so horny now.

Haha! Love it!

And now, update!

~MD

Whoa, ok. You weren't supposed to review my stories. Especially 'On A Pale Horse'. I'm growing frustrated with it.

I said five reviews. I was actually writing the third one when I got very rudely interrupted. Gah.

Anyway, to continue on where I left off last night, Michael is so sweet! He's such a sweet character and everything and the relationship with him and Alicia (OMGIREMEMBERHERNAME!) is like 'Aw. Kodak moment.' (to quote from the story). Hee! Love it!

And Alicia is so annoying. Seriously! That doesn't mean I don't like her though.

“Hello earth to Alicia. This is reality calling, do you read?”

You know what, ** it. I’ll go over there and clock that ** myself. Who the hell does she think she is? I mean look at her hair. She can’t honestly think she can get away with those black roots? There’s over an inch of new growth. Hello. I’m sorry honey it’s time to go back to the saloon and touch up your blond cuz your brunette is showing.

“ALICIA!”

I love that bit! Because it shows how Alicia's not paying attention at all to Michael without actually putting down in words. It's funny too. I mean 'She can’t honestly think she can get away with those black roots?' I can totally understand that. Alicia must be itching to dye that girl's hair.

~MD

Hehe! I love Michael! He's like this younger sibling that acts like an older sibling! I mean, he's even more mature than his sister!

“So what’s next?” Tristan asked as he ran his fingers through his dark hair. (Yes all four of us Polanski children are raven-haired blue-eyed, pale skinned, carbon copies of one another. We’re like the brunette version of Children of the Damned.)

That's hilarious. The notion of the Children of the Damned. I'm going to steal that idea from you because I hate describing stuff and you just managed to describe one whole family in just about one line.

*sigh* I'm actually starting to sympathize with ... Sissy (Oh my gosh I still don't remember her name! *dies*). I mean, she's been living in luxury for practically her whole life and suddenly it's no longer an option for her!

Poor girl.

Oh well, at least she still has Michael helping her.

~MD

Ok, I totally dig this story. But I can't believe you haven't updated this since last year! LAST YEAR! *insert dramatic gasp here*

So I'm going to make you update this by reviewing every single chapter of this story. So yes, missy, you get five reviews. *insert insane cackle here*

First of, I love the protaganist (or however the heck you call it - I can't spell for shitz, nor can I remember names). The total voice of this whole story is completely different from 'My Wonderwell'. The girl's completely spoilt, bratty, snobbish, and she makes me want to hurt her.

Second of all, there's this similarity between the humor of this story and 'My Wonderwell', only in 'My Wonderwell', the guy's more like the 'ohmygoshi'msogeeky' type while this one's more like 'DUH! It's SO Chanel *flipsblondehairrolleyes*' type. I mean seriously, I haven't read these kinda stories in years! And yours just made me wanna laugh.

My life, as I knew it, was over. Any other person getting this type of news would die of complete and utter shock. But I’m a resilient girl. I’m strong and tough. And dammit no man, not even my father, is gonna break my spirit!

“Can I at least keep my cell phone?”

“Only if you’re going to pay for it yourself.”

Okay, well, that may have cracked me a little.

Hee! That's my favorite bit of this chapter. I mean, she reminds me of someone I know. The type that goes 'I can so handle this' and in the next minute: OMG! I BROKE A NAIL! O.O

Now on to the next chapter.

~MD

bahahahaha. I found a new story to fall in love with xD

I love it!

...this will so be me, minus the looks, if my dad ever cuts me off ~_~;; -sighs-

I'm going to love this story xD

hel I love it already!!ok I want to read the next ones but the bell is going to ring so i must go. I love it! I will finish it later!

LOVE IT! (i seem to like those words today...)

I so love this story. I read some of the first chapter b, but now that I read the rest I want you to UPDATE! ANd most of the funny comments you made...wait, ALL of them I KNEW! 20 POINTS FOR ME! I hardly ever know what the ** the author is talking about! ANd The Jack-in-the-Crack part was SO funny. My sister calls it that! OMG, she's a Capricorn TOO! O.O

COOL! I like the waiter guy...but I'm still waiting for the YAOI action to appear like a freaking pimple out of nowhere... I'm so READY FOR IT!! DO sometihng with this story, will you dahling?

Alicia is so funny

YAY! YOU FINALLY CONTINUED! OMG! It's so effing funny! Update sooner than last time! YAY!

YAY! PIna COLADAS!

thius is such a great story, but you seem to have stopped, which is such a pity! Please please try and continue with it

Ooh! ^_^ i love it! You must update soon, or i shall hunt you down and force you to finish ^_^

Very cool story. It's very easy to hate the main character and her friends lol...which I assume you meant for the audience to feel. I can't wait for the next chapter!