i don't really know what to say (for once)it's happy, it's beautiful.

Very nice! Liked the idea behind it and the way you chose to portray it. Only one small criticism: The rhyming of 'trees' and 'knees' in the 3rd stanza may not have been intentional, but the rhyme stands out too much, almost in a forced way. Other than that, which was a very minor point by the way, this was really good! Keep it up!

Interesting. Confusingly interesting.

hey this one is quite different from your other ones. and its confusing i think i get it but i think i dont too haha maybe yu'll hav to explain it to me. or maybe its supposed to be confusing. i like it tho. bye