okay.
No.. Very cool.
Cryptic.
Yet cool.
I like it, but I still don't get it.
Explain it to me one day.
SNI

Wow.
Nice.
Very nice.

Cryptic indeed! I had to read it a few times before I even had a touch of what was being said, but I'm slower than most so maybe it is me :P.
Anyway, seriously, great piece. I say that a lot but I mean it when I say it. a very captivating poem is hard to come by, and one wrapped in the cloak of such great writer's voice is even harder.
As you may have guessed, I realy like it when the writer's voice is present.
Anyway, let's cut it down to this; great job.
~Magnus