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| seraphfox 2004-07-01 ch 1,   | wow that was so funny and different, i really liked the way you laughed at christanity, this is brillaint. |
| smellslikerainbows 2004-06-25 ch 1, | Thank God(tee hee) you've not dissapeared! I love all the imagery; fantastic job in that respect. The point of the story, so far, however, seems a tad ... murky. I'd love to see where this might lead, because at the moment it just seems, what do I want to say, caustic and harsh. Funny, but harsh. On the other hand, I love the way it leads you to link "dirty" with "religion." In fact, I like this quite a lot. Since you said "first chapter", I do hope there will be more! |
| Just Wolf 2004-06-23 ch 1, | OH MY GOD! Literally. That was amazing. AMAZING! it was so ironic, and so funny. it so utterly and completely took the ** of a religion that desperately needs toh ave the ** taken out of it, but in a way that was so totally ireverant and extremely hilarious that it was just incredible, imaginative, ironic. you name the superlative,a nd i'll give it to you. this is wonderful. i absolutely adore it. wait while i print out twenty copies and give them to all my friends and anonymously post them to all the catholics, newborn christiian, lutherans, and so on that i know. this si the best religious parody that i've ever read. i'm in AWE. |
| JC Peters 2004-06-23 ch 1, | Thats a new way to be converted, lol. This is really interesting I can't wait to see where you are going with this. Write more soon, please. |