|Reviews for My Disturbance|
| Deavon Brooks 11/16/04 . chapter 1
i don't know what to say in this review except that this is the most beautifully disturbing poem i have ever read. very descriptive, portrays clear image of what is happening in the poem.
| misti 9/21/04 . chapter 1
I love this one! i think i posted another review about this one, but i don't know if it got put up or not. another one of my favorites. i have too many.
Whoo! Rock On!
| Terpsichore13 6/24/04 . chapter 1
Um, this is very um, freaky. How can you think these thoughts Durelen? Anyways, no I'm not paying much attention now, and yes, I will read your other poems, however scarey and sucicidal they may seem. You're on my favorite authors list by the way! (Don't ask me why)
| Eagle Seance 6/24/04 . chapter 1
A very good angst poem...
*ponders about the blood, the self-hate...*
Well rather graphic, but sometimes you have to be don't you, to get things across. Very vivid imagery created (i've said that twice). The last two lines really intensified the theme. Great stuff
| Infinit1 6/23/04 . chapter 1
This is god. Very vivid. I can almost feel the pain and rejestion.
Please, check me out sometime