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Reviews For: Satan The Savior

JustBella
2004-06-25
ch 1,
abuseHm, very interesting, good as well. Have to say that the title truly interested me, hm, good job, keep up the good work
Infinit1
2004-06-23
ch 1,
abuseVery dark, very vivid...it's good.
Check me out sometime
slain-angel
2004-06-23
ch 1,
abuseI love this one, too. As with the other poem I reviewed, the only thing I would change is the "Off this ledge", maybe to "over this ledge". Oh, and maybe instead of "Of which I have stood" to "on which I have stood", but I love the idea. I love the line "I'll be awaiting my happy torture".
Good job!
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