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| JustBella 2004-06-25 ch 1, | abuseHm, very interesting, good as well. Have to say that the title truly interested me, hm, good job, keep up the good work |
| Infinit1 2004-06-23 ch 1, | abuseVery dark, very vivid...it's good. Check me out sometime |
| slain-angel 2004-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI love this one, too. As with the other poem I reviewed, the only thing I would change is the "Off this ledge", maybe to "over this ledge". Oh, and maybe instead of "Of which I have stood" to "on which I have stood", but I love the idea. I love the line "I'll be awaiting my happy torture". Good job! |