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Kuro
2008-11-04
ch 19,
O-Oh my god. That was so beautiful.
I mean that's all I can say! It was a beautiful story. I loved how you wrote when they all had that lovely get-together and told embarrasing stories. It was so ... I don't know. You wrote it beautifully, managed to capture that happiness you get when you're with friends. You know - that mushy lighthearted one. So awesome.
Great story. Honestly.
D's Silly G
2008-10-09
ch 1,
great story there! i quite Loved it, right from the very start and i must say i love your use of time! i mean we all like these stories to start young and in some cases they almost have to to get the feel of it right, but how you waited the three years and how it didn't just happen BAM after they met up again. it was really nice. also the way you wrote it like 'it had been two months...'or whatever. it just fit right in and didn't try to find useless filler for that missing time - adding in just enough to make it all worth it and to keep me hooked for the past few hours sinse i found this :P

i also love how karl found his own life and friends and made good with D's buds too. I love how Lex was the same lex and how he explained how K's past affected his love (which really connected the first and second parts of the story as it were) and the 'your it for me line' beautiful...oand how he did rehab on his own then so happy when he made it! ok i'm sleepy/hypering it up now and gonna stop or i'll blab on about your greatness all night till the sun comes up (and yes i DID stay up until 3:26 to read this - worth every second of non sleep)
sana
2008-07-03
ch 19,
Hey, you mentioned me in your profile! I think you are a brilliant writer. Can you write a one-shot about how their lives turn out, say after a year? It would tie up all the loose-ends. Also, I fell in love with the characters you created & would like to have a little bit more of them.
gloria
2008-07-03
ch 19,
WOW! WOW! What an amazing story! Karl is so yummy! I felt bad for Lex, but hey, Drake & Karl belong together. I want more...
PencilSketchS
2008-06-18
ch 19,
i read this all at once and i really enjoyed it immensely. i love that your characters grew. both in age and character. i admire Karl and adore Lex but i'm still happy with how it ended. it's good to be reminded that there is hope out there and we can find our own determination to find our own when encouraging characters in the stories we read, even if we don't have particularly huge problems. you story and your characters leave a strong impression and what more could any writer want. have u considered a follow up on lex's story? or for Mark even? if u did i would definately read it.
amber
2008-03-27
ch 19,
very well-written story. good job. only one grouse - why so few reviews? C'mon people REVIEW !!
sana
2008-03-27
ch 19,
I absolutely adore ACIP. Thank you for a lovely story.
Its one of the best romance stories I've ever read (and I've read a lot!). You've got a real talent for creating wonderful yet believable characters that ur readers can fall in love with (I'm crazy about Karl).

Keep writing. All the best 4 ur future writing endeavors.
Back of Beyond
2007-04-28
ch 19,
Amazing story, there's no other way to put it! I seriously enjoyed reading this, I'll have to go cehck out your other work. This is definitely going on my favourite stories list! *Which I'm soon reaching the limit on...oh noes!*
TrishaNM
2007-04-09
ch 1,
I just finished the first chapter and I must say that I adore it thus far. Your style of writing is hard to beat and is probably the best I've read here, Fiction Press, so far (I say that like I've been here forever
Sinister Slash
2007-04-08
ch 19,
I love this story! It has a mix of everything.

The ending was great, but im sad about lex and karl. But i cant say im not happy drake and Karl finally got together. Through the whole story i was like "damn, when will they be a couple!?"

So I like threw confetti and did a dance when they finally said "i love you" to each other ^_^

You story makes it soo easy to fall in love with the characters, and i am very sorry that i have finished this story...cause now its over.

You are a very good writer. I shall have to see if you have any other story or one-shots.

But you are so going on my fav. author list. and this story is going in my favs. too.

;)
dot-sye
2007-02-27
ch 19,
wow
honestly... stories with happy endin's dunt usually seem to get the feelin' across fer me... this was all like... WOW
yer style of writin' is magnificent, i love the way you wrote it and though sometimes i was a bit confussed as to who was talkin', due to the constant style through out the story, near the endin' chapters it was all easy and nice
i really liked it and i will definately start readin' the rest of yer stories... but this one was truly amazin'
please continue writin' beautiful pieces like this! ^^
Midnights Scream
2006-12-02
ch 9,
I have to say I didn't expect all this to happen, but it's nice that some things are starting out good and coming together
Midnights Scream
2006-12-01
ch 4,
Ah... sad yet good story. I continue to read
Midnights Scream
2006-11-30
ch 1,
sounds interesting will read!
Lavender-Drop
2006-11-22
ch 19,
I’ve been reading this all night, and I love it. It’s so odd, in the beginning I though Karl was an ** and Drake so cute and innocent, but turns out they switched places, although Karl isn’t really innocent he has that air about him. And I know Drake isn’t really an ** but he really was irking me, can someone be that dense? And poor Lex ending up resenting Karl… and I loved Mark, he was just so cute.
Thank you
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