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| Judith Iris 2004-09-06 ch 1,  | Hey little Dude!! This is a description of you: TALENTED TALENTED TALENTED!! You are so amazing in writeing poems!! Wow! I just loved this one. It describes the situation perfectly. (I wonder how you did that...) Even if im not your neighbor, I really do understand. Keep up the great work!! |
| Mormon Princess 1 2004-08-06 ch 1,  | NIce poem. I totally love it! |
| Candy-yum-yum 2004-08-05 ch 1, | wow! i absolutelly loved that one, i can amagine it as a song definatelly, and i think this was a wonderful way to express that fealing. well done! |
| Aylae 2004-07-02 ch 1, | This is so true. I know how it feels...Great style. I like...I like alot. Fallen V (thanks for the review) |
| Happy-Platipus 2004-06-24 ch 1, | You know, reading this again, I realized that it is true for about 99 percent of the relationships between men and women in the world. The first time I read it I was thinking about them, but it can really be anyone! *sigh* guys... But I also realized that in the end a lot of thoose relationships do work out! |
| Sunflower Philosophy 2004-06-23 ch 1, | Two confused people in this confusing world... *sigh* *closes eyes to guard herself against the wave of pain she avoids when talking about this* Yo, girl, when are you gonna be home? I've been knocking your wall off! Oh, there was one thing I wanted to say about the poem itself- I love it, but the rhyming is slightly forced in a few places- I can understand the idea behind "You don't have to rule", but that's only because I live next door to you. To others it probably sounds like you were just looking really hard for a word to rhyme with "cool". Other than that... *closes eyes again* m~* Sunflower, anyone |
| catseyeview 2004-06-23 ch 1, | Oh, I just love the ending, so profound, so reaching. |