|Reviews for She|
| Sidra A Kollers 12/8/05 . chapter 1
Gorgeous poem, I love your style. It was very visual.
| DiffusedBlues 10/17/05 . chapter 1
You are a mere memory here you areNo more than a ghost now you Moved on since seventeen A veteran poet who took to the world youNever came back but wondered who took to the sea of expression...
| Rainbow Fingers 8/1/05 . chapter 1
Another amazing piece. It was morbid and beatiful. Loved it, especially the 'Cracked lips, sandpaper tongue' I don't know why, but I really like the line. And of course the ending, which tied everything. Nicely done.
| aries-diva-JC 7/23/05 . chapter 1
haunting... love d flow, how u would say 'she' and then say what she was on the next line... fantastic job...
| do not resuscitate 5/8/05 . chapter 1
amazing imagery and word choice. stunning poetry.
| SilverSpinner 4/28/05 . chapter 1
Oh wow...powerful...I really like it. "She is knife hipbones she is sharp ribs, sharper nails, animal inside her belly clawing at nothing..." I like how the lines seem mixed up but it all makes so much sense. Amazing work.
| poetic abortion 12/18/04 . chapter 1
;_; This was a beautiful poem.
| this is my love for you 12/18/04 . chapter 1
Wow... powerful stuff.
| Helxine 12/6/04 . chapter 1
| Kitty-brdg 11/4/04 . chapter 1
*claps* very good. I liked this mucho.
| AsianScaper 9/19/04 . chapter 1
I love how you've put the poem together and how also, it is fragmented. As though the persona is pausing to think, realizing some truth after the space of each line, only to spout some words and stop again.
However, for all the negative and dark images, she holds seduction in her grasp and not matter how hollow her voice, can still speak with what is physical in her.
Well, as a reader, that's what I've read from the poem. And the bias is there, for I love images. Keep the wonderful writing up! It's always a warm feeling at the pit of my stomach to see good poetry about. Cheers!
| Etheral 8/29/04 . chapter 1
O0o0o0o0o0o .. i like. Wonderful job!
| APersonAndAHalf 8/7/04 . chapter 1
Woah...don't know how to review this other than saying this was beyond my capability to review...
| jack c. weller 7/28/04 . chapter 1
Honest with powerful metaphors.
| Nita 7/23/04 . chapter 1
Oh, I really like this one. The lack of punctuation is really effective - gives it a desperate, frenzied sort of feel that's kind of overwhelming. (But in a very good way.) 'she is Death with a made-up face' - I love that. Very striking, perfectly done. :)