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| Eclipsia Soulbird 2006-05-06 ch 1, | i really, really love this. it's sweet, touching. i liked Faigel--both the name and character. this would make a wonderful published short story--i'm sure you could win all sorts of awards for it. are you just a beginning writer? whether or not you've just begun, i've been writing for 4 years and haven't come close to this short masterpiece. very, VERY well done. |
| The book club 2004-06-24 ch 1, | Hey..Its good well done |