i can't wait till you get more of this story written. it's really good so far and i'd like to know where the 3 of them plan to go. please, write more soon!

Good story, I've been reading DarknessofDaughter13's story it's pretty good so far! So is yours! Please update soon!!

~Stevie~

Good. GOod fun to read, and I'm enjoying it so far. Fear not, I shall continue reading.
-PTG

Hello. I like how this story is turning out so far. Keep it up.

keep writing! i've enjoyed it so far, i'd love to see how you finish this.

a hoy hoy...good story line. It has epic written all over it. i wouldve developed the beginning some more, but i dont know your particular style of writing, being this is all i have read. this is going to get a lot better as it moves along.

so far so good...i can't wait to see what happens when they finally reach Southville. thanks for sharing and please continue writing!

hm... very descriptive and sophisticated! thanks for sharing and keep writing!

hm...some parts seem a bit twisted and confusing at first but i guess i have to read it again! thanks for sharing and keep writing!