It's so GOOD! Oh my gosh! The chapters were a little short, but it was still fabulous. I love Peter in all of his cuteness and cuddlyness. Joel is amazing, and he's so melancholic and scared. I love your writings!

oh yeah, i liked it, but now some criticism
your writing is pretty good, what i'd say that it lacked detail, and no i don't mean rape scenes, you should give your story more feeling, it sounded more like a summary of a story
sorry if it was harsh, just felt like saying something

you should write more longer stories like that ^^
*hugs*

Of course you should continue. Keep writing. I, for one, want to know what is next. I like it. Thnx for having it. It actually kind of reminded me of something. Something happened to me and it brought it back. I just did not have someone to run to.

Take care.
jag

i want more storie>,

i luv ur story

i can't believe you can even THINK it's bad! thats one of the most inspiring shounen-ai stories i've EVER read, EVER!

~night

Oh my God that's so cool! That's really really awesome and it's been finished off so well. :D

Very good! A great story.(Congrats on finishing :-) )

~CF

loved it. Simply beautiful. Much better than my own.

WHAT! YOU CANT LEAVE ME HANGING.. Bad cliffy bad bad cliffy. Gr. Update otherwise I will send you a million annoying emails from the coll. :/ Get a move on. Why are you still reading this?!

good. not much angst in here.

I'd hate lying to my lover (have they slept together yet?) I hate Joels fther. Evil bastard, EVIL!

I didn't know men could... enter each other, as such. But then again, I dont know any male anatomy. Poor boys. :(

wow. Poor Joel. This is Elspeth the Brat by the way. I think this is really good.

Keep going this is great