Me and you sitting on the curb. Looking at the pristine clear blue sky, with the few exceptions of the explosive puffs of gastric water. You pointing out every single oddity when there appeared to be none. Man, I really miss you T.T
I'm going to write again Gaki, it's going to come slowly though, I'm going to rewrite The Blood Heir. This time it will hopefully make sense to not only me, but the rest of the world. XD

I really like the way you've given the readers how a perception from an onlooker can be quite different than reality. It teaches us a good lesson. Who knew such simple words strung together could create such a wonderful atmosphere?

NC

Very entertaining. I enjoyed it. :D

I once had a place with a garbage dump...it was my old apartment. It smelled. Yeah...and that's my story.

awesome.

I wrote something like this, but I was looking at a little boy holding his mom's hand at a train station. Maybe I'll type it up.

this is good, girl.

i have a place just like that... and i miss it. I LURVEZ THIS POEM!

Well said, I love it.

i like how you wrote this poem. usually poems rhyme but yours didn't. I like how that's different. It's not cliched so woohoo! i can't wait to read all your other stpries and poems. btw, i got a new chapetr up. thnx 4 the review:)

this was very poetic and sweet. and i just adored it.

Interesting poem (: keep up the good work

Wow..It's wonderful! It could be a little longer, though.

Thanks for reviewing my "Drowning in Guilt" story..You made me realize it didn't make any sense.

Great poem, though.

i liked this piece. i don't know what to say for once. keep writing.

just,~shadow

"They'd Never Know" that this poem was the best!

o yea found it on the bus monday

WOAH FREAK OUT! that review scared me!it's...*GULP*...unlike you. ok i said it...umm.hi.please dont shorten swear words...ok?

This is such a beautiful poem it had to have come from a very beautiful girl.

Great work from such a simple thing. I can imagine it sitting on a street corner and hearing this poem. I'm gona cry. :^)