That was sad. I thought you wrote it very well, and the way you used the words were very good, it just had a sad tone to it. Bene! [I think that's spelled wrong. In case it is:] Good Job!

How sad. Is that why clowns are always crying? That was a really sad poem...weird.
Good though. Nice rhymes, flow and all that other stuff that I can't remember.
Later,
K.S. Night