Jon-
Yes, so I hadn't saved the review I wrote for this a few days ago, and it didn't go through here either...
I can't exactly remember what was in the review, but I know the general idea I had.
I already told you om msn that I like this, but did I also mention how unbelievable, touching and eloquent this is?
It has a breeze of melancholy in it for me that I can't but love, and the thought behind the poem itself... outstanding.
It's a thought that everyone has, every once in a while, but the way you described it is better than the other tries I read and have written myself all together.
My compliments to you for this extraodinairy piece, Jon, and thank you for sharing it.
-Rachel.

"What will happen when the grass stops growing,
When flowers stop showing
Their beauty to the world?"
I did not really like how this stanza was written...That's about all I can say that is negative.
This poem would rock as a song! You should definitely try to fit it to music...If you do, let me know!

Hey! It's Riss again!
No...don't worry I'm not stalking you...=)
I love you poetry...though I think I may have mentioned that a while ago...oh well...I bet you like hearing that don't you? Well..I like it to say the least! So...KEEP WRITING!
-Riss

Very good. It really makes you think about life. I like things like that. My only suggestion is that when it says "What future is there for Men?" I think it sounds better as "What does the future hold for Men?" Just nitpicky stuff. Very good poem over all, and it's your own, so you don't have to listen to me.