Aw...that's sad. Well written.

woa.. interesting and powerful

I was kinda confused about what you were talking about, but I didn't really mind. There's something about this poem that made me want to read it again. I enjoyed the last line gave off: Blinded by heaven, I stand in her shadow.

Woah... That's awesome imagery at the end, i love it.

holy crappers dude you never cease to amaze me. awesome, just like all your other work. it's so deep and touching...damn your awesome at this! good job
kitty

Ouch. I know this scenario all too well. This poem is so well-written I'm speechless. THe beginning is so powerful, it's incredible, just wow.