good intro and foreshadowing about ethern's power. there were alot of spelling errors and even some words you made up, so you may want to work on that aspect, it can be distracting

Hi, Me again. I know it's kinda weird reviewing the first chapter after reviewing the second and third but it won't let me submit my review more then once. Anyway, all I really wanted to say was 1) Your welcome for reviewing and thanks for the e-mail and 2) I thought sourcerer was spelt funny so I checked it up and it's really spelled Sorcerer so leave out the U. Well that's all I needed to tell you so keep at it and update soon. Write lots!

I really liked this chapter. Very interesting. I was glad that you updated and hope you update again soon.Write lots!

Very good story! Nice cliffy, though I really want to know what happens. Please update soon! Write lots