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| jimenarocker 2007-12-01 ch 1, | Wow, that was kinda humbling^^ I liked it! Like we don't need what we have, and we as a society are always saying we could give up what we don't need, but when it's taken, we feel a little cheated... |
| Celtic Dancer 2007-11-29 ch 1, | Brilliant. Shows us how materialistic we really are, but the peom itself is fun to read. Nice job! :] |
| Lynnie-Pooh 2005-05-11 ch 1, | O, I liked how you put a rat in there instead of a person or Jesus or somthing religous like most people would do. It made it funny and cute. I liked it all. Keep writing. |
| Grape 2005-01-08 ch 1, | *laughs* This is really funny,and has a good beat going for it. This is great! |
| really-bad-egg 2004-08-02 ch 1, | To be honest (as always) at first I thought this poem was going nowhere, but the end saved it, gave it a whole new perspective. Now I love it! Keep writing, k? ~Manda |
| RONAQUA 2004-07-08 ch 1, | MUAHAha tehe yuka yuka yuka giggle giggle giggle so cute funny like the one about trying to get out of school from ms.roberts class |
| Ravensblood 2004-07-05 ch 1, | Teehee! Very funny! Now, I know there's a deep lesson in there somewhere...if I could only figure out what it is... You know, with a talking rat at your disposal, you could make lots of cash to buy even more 'don't need it' stuff! ;D |
| slowlydancingtothestars 2004-06-24 ch 1, | thats so cute and great poem! congrads! |
| Words of Trees 2004-06-24 ch 1, | That's cute. It flows pretty well, and I like the line about the chainsaw. That rat is bordering on philosophical. |