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Reviews For: The Don't Need It Stuff

jimenarocker
2007-12-01
ch 1,
Wow, that was kinda humbling^^ I liked it! Like we don't need what we have, and we as a society are always saying we could give up what we don't need, but when it's taken, we feel a little cheated...
Celtic Dancer
2007-11-29
ch 1,
Brilliant.

Shows us how materialistic we really are, but the peom itself is fun to read. Nice job! :]
Lynnie-Pooh
2005-05-11
ch 1,
O, I liked how you put a rat in there instead of a person or Jesus or somthing religous like most people would do. It made it funny and cute. I liked it all. Keep writing.
Grape
2005-01-08
ch 1,
*laughs* This is really funny,and has a good beat going for it. This is great!
really-bad-egg
2004-08-02
ch 1,
To be honest (as always) at first I thought this poem was going nowhere, but the end saved it, gave it a whole new perspective. Now I love it! Keep writing, k?
~Manda
RONAQUA
2004-07-08
ch 1,
MUAHAha tehe yuka yuka yuka giggle giggle giggle so cute funny like the one about trying to get out of school from ms.roberts class
Ravensblood
2004-07-05
ch 1,
Teehee! Very funny! Now, I know there's a deep lesson in there somewhere...if I could only figure out what it is...
You know, with a talking rat at your disposal, you could make lots of cash to buy even more 'don't need it' stuff! ;D
slowlydancingtothestars
2004-06-24
ch 1,
thats so cute and great poem! congrads!
Words of Trees
2004-06-24
ch 1,
That's cute. It flows pretty well, and I like the line about the chainsaw. That rat is bordering on philosophical.
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