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| Katterree Fengari 2004-06-24 ch 1,   | I myself don't care for rhyming like this...And since you are rhyming, the style of a more traditional poem, which means it would make more sense to have punctuation. |
| Farewell-Twilight 2004-06-24 ch 1, | I like the ending :) might have been better to put 'define you as a whole' instead of divide but its still very true and very well written xx |