Reviews for A Leap in the Dark

Reviews For: A Leap in the Dark

Je-Nie-Dieu 2006-12-06 ch 1,	abuseI have to agree with your reviewers who said you need to make a real story out of this little snippet. But, I love furs and I love rebellion, so I love you! Merry Christmas.
Para Noya 2006-08-08 ch 1,	abuseI highly recommend making this a proper story, you wrote just enough to make the reader interested and then cut off with no promises as to whether you're going to continue or not? Aw, that just makes me want to ** at you until you throw something else out there. However, since YOU are the writer of what could very well be the next-ahem, since you are the writer, you have the choice. I'm just saying that I'd support you if you do! ^__^ Para Noya
RainShadow2005 2005-02-25 ch 1,	abuseFor a brainstorm, this was quite good. Maybe someday you'll consider expanding it as I couldn't get a clear picture in my mind of the characters, setting, or mood. It intrigued me, but left me hanging. I see that it's been over half a year since you posted it, but it would be interesting to see it fleshed out some more. RainShadow2005
Aisling (Syzygy not signed ... 2004-10-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseOh! Loved it. It's nice how it is, but now I'm curious, so more would be great! Nice feel about it too ^ ^
Werecat99 2004-06-25 ch 1,	abuseLoved it. But this more of a tease than a real story. I'd like to see more of this and I hope that you will decide to expand it.
found and lost 2004-06-24 ch 1,	abusewell 1st I shall say thanks for the review...it does say about heather in the bio bit aswell but I see your point ... I think this is really good and I would love to read more if you write any more oh and if you do please tell me because I would love to read it.
VladimirsAngel 2004-06-24 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'd say it would definitely be worth expanding on this...it has a raw feel of nerves and drive about it...normal for rabbits, possibly! ^_^

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