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| DementedOracle 2005-02-26 ch 1, | Maybe this is something that everyone goes through, but this hit really close to home for me. I was never fat, but my parents have their subtle pressures, and I run miles each week. Once when I was little I dreamed of being a teacher. Of interacting with young people for the better part of my life. Part of me still thinks fondly that it would be a nice way to live. Since then, however, I've been influenced in many ways by many people, and ironically, I'm now considering a career in law. Heck, but even in the fascination with the cat I can see parrallels.This story makes me want to go out and run all my troubles away. Well written. It needs no constructive criticism. |
| pseudo-smile 2004-09-08 ch 1, | wow, so awesome, so real...keep it up... |
| Disgrace 2004-06-24 ch 1, | "If I'm free, its because I'm always running" - Jumi Hendrix i know exactly the feeling and why you run- i get the same. well written |