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| pinkfluffyoranges 2005-09-21 ch 32,  | abusethis was so good, a perfect ending for my utterly crappy day. i hop eto read more of your work. keep it up! |
| KissMeQuickly 2004-12-04 ch 32, | abuseI really liked it. i tayed up all night... okay, not all night, but it's currently 1:16AM, and if you ask me, that's all night. anyhow, i think that it had just the right amount of angst and drama with out going overboard. i liked the shot glass idea, it was very clever, and i'm sure it would help a lot of people with drinking problems out there. This really was a great story and i liked how you tied it all together at the end, but still left some for the imagination. we had to "fill in the holes," as Louis Sachar said. i guess that i can only congratulate you, because i've read some pretty crappy peices, and this wasn't one of them, so, congrats.--Yours, KissMeQuickly-- |
| Scout723 2004-11-14 ch 1, | abuseThe Country Boys makes them seem like jack-asses who are trying to be "Bad-asses." Klein doesn't really seem like a "Bad-**," rarely do you see the son of a "Country Star" being a "Bad-**." |
| joker8baller 2004-11-09 ch 32, | abuseGreat story... lol write sum more! |
| Qtpicherios 2004-08-10 ch 32, | abuseOMG! that was soo sweet! i loved every bit of it. awesome job! |
| ShadowsMidnightScandal 2004-08-09 ch 32, | abuseAwesome story. I loved it from begging to end. Can't wait to read your other stories soon. |
| Aphrodides 2004-08-09 ch 32, | abuseAwesome is all I have to say!! Is this one going to be continued like the rest? |
| Hadeer El Hindawi 2004-08-08 ch 32, | abuseTHAT was a great ending, to an amazing story! Excellent job, Lighter! Honestly...this story was so professional. I loved every single second of reading it! I applaud you! *claps for her* congrats. If I may suggest something. Collect all the stories about the Ridge family, put them altogether, and publish them! You better believe I would buy it! Swear to god, I will! ^_^ |
| fortune cookie etiquette 2004-08-08 ch 32, | abusewonderful ending darling (i especially adore the last paragraph!) LOVE THE ENTIRE STORY! can't wait for the next one |
| tinytot81 2004-08-08 ch 32, | abusewha! its over best story i have ever read. your story is... great fantastic stupedous! not to mention a suspense story im glad nicole and klein got back together. i guess the saying is true great writers write great storys yep well later days |
| Phoebe Love 2004-08-08 ch 32, | abuseOh, I'm so sad that this story is over! But all good things must come to an end, I guess. You have done a great job with shaping these characters and making it so that all the emotions they felt were flet by the reader, drawing them in even more. I hope you keep writing and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Feebs |
| Hadeer El Hindawi 2004-08-07 ch 31, | abuseOh that was a great chapter! Klein turned out to be a romantic after all!! ^_^ Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next! |
| Hadeer El Hindawi 2004-08-07 ch 30, | abuseI think thats the best thing to do too...now Nicole will realize that love is more important than family right? heh...I guess I'll just wait and see! ^_^ |
| ShadowsMidnightScandal 2004-08-05 ch 30, | abuseI love this chapter, they had a father son talk, aw. Update soon. |
| meg 2004-08-05 ch 29, anon. | abusefor some reason i think this story is funy but . . . .not at the same time.i duno why.but i like it.so you gotta update n stuff.lol |