I love this poem. Why does it begin "Without meaning to..." Why didn't you mean to? It's much sadder when you don't intend it. And you arched your back long after your back was dust/dumped in Wicklow - I told you that already... But it's stunning, I love it. I just came in here to read the other reviews.. Bah! I won't download images so I don't know what I'm missing. All the best, from your clever mad friend, R

i luv ur descriptions. i liked how u described those neon eyes. very creative.
keep on writing:)

It's awesome. really beautiful. almost made me cry. it's exactly how i feel.