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| hiddencloud9 2005-09-05 ch 1, | abuseman that pride line gets me...this is definatly a wake up call for the vain... |
| psycho-kitty-says-moo 2004-07-04 ch 1, | abusethis was well written, and descriptive i'm glad i had a chance to read it |
| Loki Mischeif-Maker 2004-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWow. . . . that was Lucifer, wasn't it? That was just . . . amazingly well done. I like the way you tell the story, so we're caught off guard near the end. . . . Wonderful telling, if a bit unsettling tale. . . . Cheers! |
| Kage and Raven 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuse**, that's deep. Is that what the translation really means? And where'd you come up with this man? Sweet Jesus never really thought of Hell like that...but dont you sort of need hope in your life? ...heh who knows im confused as hell now...im going to grab a cup of joe and think about it XD Thanks for spurring on some of my thoughts i thought i had put away, glad i didnt lose them ^^; anyways awesome story and i think it should stay a one shot. |