like. definately like... i am SO an actor and carpenter, and boy is my room a chimneysweep... It's neat... good work

I like your poem very much, especially the first half of the poem. Really nice work.

Listen sweetie, life is not meaningless, pointless or worthless. Yes, all paths will have parts about them that may make them look bad, but most paths have many good parts to them too. This piece is well written, but if the feelings you are describing here are your true sentiments then I think we need to talk. Lots of Love,
~E. A. Tetje~

Story format.
He clicked on the link that shown its blue with pride, holding the fact it had not been read. Expecting it to be another poem of his coexisting writter.
He read the two lines with out much thought, but found the third more interesting and soon had read the whole poem. His eyes blurred by the edge of tears they held. He knew this was a good poem. One filled with the heart of another writter. He was glad that somebody could bring up such emotions to him, and that is rare...
Very good Wren, I thought I'd make my review a bit unique. lol. It was really the only way I could express how much I truely liked this poem. Its lovely. Oh gosh its lovely.
-Jaden