This is great b/c it talks about cutting, but not in an angsty, "kill me i hate you, me and the world" sort of way. It's caring and great. Keep it up.

-sob- that's sweet and i understand how cutting affects so many others

Sweet, heartfelt, sincere. If the problems of "Ashley" are real, I hope you helped her and I hope she is doing better. Your poems are very dramatic, but it works. It's beauitufl.

Y'know... I've read most of your poetry and I dare say atleast 90% involve the words 'I cry (out)'. Try to use different words, for surely in this huge language, there will be other potentially stronger words that could better emphasize your point. Morbid, as is most of your poems, and that's all I can say.

yu hav a typo on " my heart tears" yu put my hear tears. other than that i rele did cry happy tears it was that sweet :D im so glad i can hav e a friend like you. i dont hav very meany friends thatr wud cut themselves for me or feel as bad as you do that i cut. but i wont cut anymore cuz i dont want you or my bf or my otehr friend to cut or be rele sad so i wont :D and im glad you dont have the hots for that other girl now. you can move on and get a gf and be rele rele happy :D