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love the sinnerr 2004-06-25 . chapter 1
This poem is really good, it has a really good message, unless I'm perspecting it wrong. I'm guessing it has something to do with enjoying the things that you have? And wanting someone for who they are and not material possessions? Maybe...?
Claes Triela de Sica 2004-06-25 . chapter 1
Excellently done. I like the alternating want and need in the fifth stanza, and the last stanza really tells much more of the story. I hope to read more soon.
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