i don't know if i like this one. it's too hopefilled for me. sorry. -shruggs-

Inspiring, but can be improved lots.

a nice warm touch at the end=0)

OMG HUNNI! i love it! That is the best poem you have ever written! omg i love it so much its going on my favourite and and omg ilove it :D im so glad you realized that you were never alone and you never will be cuz you will always have friends and unless ur computer breaks you will alwatys have me! haha or unless my computer breaks :S but it wont! haha neway gotta go do chore bye hunni luv ya so much *huggz* bye1 awsome poem!