I love this. I've never thought about makeup concealing who we really are...

very well written. and the message you're sending couldn't be any truer

thanx for reviewing me, this is a really great poem.

Great. Fantastic analogy.

I'm shedding my tears right now! Aw your poems hit me right here *points to heart* If i could write poems like you, maybe i'd do well in my poetry units! Take care!

some times the best person to be is the person you don't want to be. great job!

ok this is good! i can really relate to this! be the way... your account is set up so the person reviewing have to sign in to review...it is kinda a pain but if you want it that way great :o) just trying to give you a heads up. i didn't know about it till someone told me. i think my favorite line is "but the real...skin". it made me realize that hey... maybe make up isn't so important? Good Job!! -LJ
p.s. thank you very much for the view!

Like last night, my god, I had big black circles around my eyes. Anyways, I love your poem, it has a lot of meaning, keep writing.