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| David Stephen 2004-12-30 ch 1,   | Wow ... impressive ... dark ... brilliant and atmospheric. I especially loved 'When heaven has lost her voice'. Great imagery and metaphors. ~DS~ |
| Jacqueline Howcis 2004-08-10 ch 1, | err can't recall if i told you about my new thing! I’m starting a sillyish campaign it’s call the ‘project smile’ all you have to do is when your walking down the street and see someone who might be lost, unhappy or just needing a smile then flash them a smile! In hope that maybe one of them smile you give might just raise someone hope… every little smile helps! |
| arbysauce93 2004-07-06 ch 1, | This is a nice dark one. First of, I love the line, "Dakness shines your light" Tht first stanza is just beautiful. You have a very original rhyming pattern on this poem. I like it. Originality and creativity are good elements. I too comonly use the same scheme for every poem. Anyways, good poem. You have some beautiful lines in this one. Keep writing! |
| Crimson-Fantasy 2004-06-30 ch 1, | i was listening to music while i read this so it sounded great when i sang it along with the tune i am sorry i a a freak well i think i might put this on my favs list yea ok i will seeya later write more i want to reveiw |
| Crudely drawn pigeon 2004-06-25 ch 1, | I think the first verse is the best :) *CDP* |
| Visions of Harmony 2004-06-25 ch 1, | Hey! Ooh, I can relate to this alot! Great expression! I love it! :D Rozie x x x |
| Seeker of the Way 2004-06-25 ch 1, | =0 WoW! This is g0_0d! ("gO_Od" copyright Julie, not me! used with kind permission) The structure, the ideas, the insight! Yowza, if you don't get published I am going to ... um ... CURSE! hahaha DAMN I wish I had room in my favorites, only 30? DAMN! |