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| Tobyk947 2008-05-30 ch 4, | abuseThe italics under the person who's speaking in the begining of the chapters makes me want to listen to evanesance. -shifty eyes- i'm watching you and your subconscious trickery, woman. |
| Vampire's Werewolf 2008-03-20 ch 29, | abuseI hate my job...Sque! I love this chapter, it's so lightish and fluffy, particulary the ending. Though I don't see why Varden freaked out so much, I personally thought it was hot. *grins* Anyway your spelling is flawless, as is the structure of the sentences, and of course you kept me clued to my seat. SO all and all I give you a 10 percent on your work. Good job! I love reading your stuff and have discovered that you have a new story out, so I must go and take a look at that one. Ciao for now! |
| AmnestY InvasioN 2007-12-18 ch 41, | abuseThis is good. Your story is very addicting. It's actually the only story I have read so far on this web site, but it is so good that I think I'll check out your other stories. Please update sooner, though. Thanks! |
| QTPieCrystal 2007-12-13 ch 41, | abuseResponse to the previous reviewer: Huh? If you are talking about Gail, Gail happens to be a guy. Just thought you should know. Also, no offense, but there is no need to be snippy. If you have a problem with a story, there are better ways to get your point across. If you think Gail sounds weak, offer some suggestions or some constructive criticism. And that is all I've got to say about that. * Anyways, Cat you already know how I feel about your story. ;) But I guess there is no harm in repeating myself. !Love it! Woohoo! Hehe. :p Also, I finally found your character bios. I swear I must be slow or something, because it took me awhile to find it. Haha. Can't wait to see the new update. Take care. Peace. |
| Jess 2007-12-13 ch 5, anon. | abuseDamn could u have made her any weaker Jeez that sucked! |
| merrymowmow 2007-11-04 ch 40, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |
| Vampire's Werewolf 2007-08-30 ch 28, | abuseMeep. *hides under bed* sorry about not reviewing in about a year or so. Anywho, my I say one very true thing about this chapter? HOT. I am so very in awe of your writing skills, jealous too. I wish I could write half as good. As usual I could not find any grammar or spelling errors in this chapter. No it was not because I was distracted by the very hot guys, maybe a little distracted, it's because you write so well. Yeps *nods head sagely* well is going to go read and review the other twelve chapters. Keep up the awesome work! ciao. |
| fangsofhell 2007-08-10 ch 40, | abuselove the chapter! hope that you write another one soon! |
| crazyfish666 2007-08-08 ch 40, | abuseooh, luv this chapter! 'nother chapter, please!! |
| purplehigh 2007-08-05 ch 39, | abuseupdate please? with a cherry and a strawberry and marshmellows and chocolate syrup and everything on top?? |
| QTPieCrystal 2007-07-13 ch 39, | abuseHey there. I love this story and your characters. You're a great writer. It's definitely something I've never read before. I mean, sure I've read stories that have had vampires in them, but you've added such unique and intricate elements to your story that keeps me wanting more. I hope to see another update soon. Keep on writing. Take care. |
| fangsofhell 2007-07-06 ch 39, | abuseomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg! finally another chapter! thank you so much for uptdating!ek! please keep on uptdating! soon! |
| crazyfish666 2007-07-02 ch 39, | abuseYay! Another chapter! Very good, please get up another soon :-) |
| fangsofhell 2007-06-26 ch 38, | abusewaoh! this story is old! but why did you stop writing? it's actually a very cool story! even though you have wrote this in 04 you think that you can keep on writing new chapters? cause this story is really good! |
| crazyfish666 2007-05-18 ch 37, | abuseSchool, hm. The overheard conversation was interesting, the Sun having a crush on the Moon, rather sweet in a confusing way. Can't wait to see how it all goes. |