Oh my. You're feeding my happy bubble very nicely. Merci beaucoup! Anywho, great plot. Another great setup for some wonderful smutt.

guy in a suit, aroung twenties... sounds like the guy zable picked up to replenish his magick... does this have anything to do with blaze's mind link being 'tugged' on? is there any connection to the two?

This story is sweet, or was, depending on whether you ever update it again or not? It was interesting for all 42 chapters, not something many people can actually do. Update soon!

How is this slash if the main character is a girl?

Hm... I still really liked it. I got interested really quickly. I just don't like to read straight romances, for obvious reasons...

The italics under the person who's speaking in the begining of the chapters makes me want to listen to evanesance. -shifty eyes- i'm watching you and your subconscious trickery, woman.

I hate my job...Sque! I love this chapter, it's so lightish and fluffy, particulary the ending. Though I don't see why Varden freaked out so much, I personally thought it was hot. *grins* Anyway your spelling is flawless, as is the structure of the sentences, and of course you kept me clued to my seat. SO all and all I give you a 10 percent on your work. Good job! I love reading your stuff and have discovered that you have a new story out, so I must go and take a look at that one. Ciao for now!

This is good. Your story is very addicting. It's actually the only story I have read so far on this web site, but it is so good that I think I'll check out your other stories. Please update sooner, though. Thanks!

Response to the previous reviewer:

Huh? If you are talking about Gail, Gail happens to be a guy. Just thought you should know. Also, no offense, but there is no need to be snippy. If you have a problem with a story, there are better ways to get your point across. If you think Gail sounds weak, offer some suggestions or some constructive criticism. And that is all I've got to say about that.

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Anyways, Cat you already know how I feel about your story. ;) But I guess there is no harm in repeating myself. !Love it! Woohoo! Hehe. :p Also, I finally found your character bios. I swear I must be slow or something, because it took me awhile to find it. Haha. Can't wait to see the new update. Take care. Peace.

Damn could u have made her any weaker Jeez that sucked!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Meep. *hides under bed* sorry about not reviewing in about a year or so. Anywho, my I say one very true thing about this chapter? HOT. I am so very in awe of your writing skills, jealous too. I wish I could write half as good. As usual I could not find any grammar or spelling errors in this chapter. No it was not because I was distracted by the very hot guys, maybe a little distracted, it's because you write so well. Yeps *nods head sagely* well is going to go read and review the other twelve chapters. Keep up the awesome work! ciao.

love the chapter! hope that you write another one soon!

ooh, luv this chapter! 'nother chapter, please!!

update please? with a cherry and a strawberry and marshmellows and chocolate syrup and everything on top??

Hey there. I love this story and your characters. You're a great writer. It's definitely something I've never read before. I mean, sure I've read stories that have had vampires in them, but you've added such unique and intricate elements to your story that keeps me wanting more. I hope to see another update soon. Keep on writing. Take care.