cooland I can just imagine people spinning around in a circle, getting louder and louder... *chills down my spine*hee hee

nice repitition I like this one alot, keep it up*Solo

Hey! Not bad for a seventh grader! Pretty good, really. Although it is a little bit scary (I'm sorry - I am easily scared, ya know) but I probably won't have too many nightmares about this.

I like this chant/poem, it's so doomish ^_^

Sad, but beautiful. The words go together perfectly.

I do like this poem a considerable amount. I love how you used the couplets and emphasis. Thankyou for reviewing my work by the by.
Peace and Love,
Charles J. Williams