I really like this one. It touches the emotions one feels very well. Good job, gave me one of those wistful memory smiles _

Aw :( I can understand what you feel, it's very dark in a simple way and I like the emotions you've portrayed here. Good work!
Jenna xx

beautiful, simple, sad, and true. what else can i say. you are very good at putting emotion to word. i'm envious.

this is good
**Candi**

I know how you feel. This poem reminds me of someone I know and hold dear. I can't cry either. I try to, but no tears come. It's the price I pay...*sigh* Anyway, good job with expressing emotion.
Lor

I can't cry either. That sux. But that's not important lol, I like this song a lot. It reminds me of someone I know.

And then when someone tries to get near...they would push them away in fear...I get it now... *sits and stares, wishing she could cry* Whenever something touches me emotionally, I can't do anything but sit...because I just can't cry...

interesting... I like it a lot.. nice job!

Waiting is something that's easy, when it's time to act, that's hard. (Kinda what I go out of the poem...am I even close?)
I like this one, it's really beautiful...