Hmm . . . well, to tell the truth, the repetition isn't doing anything for me. Just seems annoying. I understand the underlying feelings, but I think you could express them in a different way.

Everyone has a past relative that is considered the "black sheep." It's best just to think that don't have to be who your ancestors were.

families will always hurt each other. and no matter how hard we try.. someone's going to be disappointed in the end.
simple but emotional. you have an interesting way of writing

Okay, I read your rules, and I know that one of them is not to ask your name. But you really sound like someone I know. If there's any possible way you'd want to talk to me, that would be great, but you don't have to. I really loved this poem. It was awesome. It rocks peanut butter lol :)
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Allie

Wow. Nice use of repetition. Your words are really powerful. I cna relate, and your song also reminds me of an older friend that I hold very dear. Let's just say that her family isn't all good, and that they have a lot of secrets to hide. Nicely written! Keep up the good work!
Lor

I like it a lot... nice repition also... very sad