 Animal luver 2005-10-03 . chapter 13aw...i expected you to include a scene with the demon convincing Kit to lead them all dramatic and stuff. o well... good chapter. interesting how easily one's faith can fail them. anyway, i'll read more later. |
 Animal luver 2005-10-03 . chapter 12grr, serves Kagami right. he's so closeminded! anyway...can't wait to see what happens next chapter! |
 Animal luver 2005-10-03 . chapter 11aww shukka and kit are so cute. this was a good chapter, but i don't find it likely that kit would use the term "movies" |
 Animal luver 2005-10-03 . chapter 10i've not much to say to this...except that these chapters are really short...but you know that already. good chapter. |
 Animal luver 2005-09-24 . chapter 9awesome! i liked how Anmin's appearance is completely oposite of Henshi's. good chapter. i'll read more later |
 Animal luver 2005-09-24 . chapter 8ah ha! the plot thickens once more! now that that chapters over i just have to read the next one! onward! |
 Animal luver 2005-09-24 . chapter 7ah ha! the pyramid was the artifact all the time wasn't it? haha! awesome chapter, i gotta read the next one! |
 Animal luver 2005-09-24 . chapter 6hm, i wonder what could be down there...at first i thought maybe the artifact or Anmin himself...but with the chanting...im not sure. good chapter! o and i know since this story is complete you probably won't take my advice, but if I were you, I would combine some of these chapters...you should only divide chapters when something new starts happening...and some times the same thing is still going on in two different chapters. anyway, good job! |
 Animal luver 2005-09-24 . chapter 5hm, (again) good chapter, although they seemed to be more upset about the statue than necessary...well...i guess if its like an idol or something, that makes sense. anyway - on to the next |
 Animal luver 2005-09-24 . chapter 4ah ha, so anmin defeated him, but now he's back for more? hm, interesting...good chapter. |
 Animal luver 2005-09-24 . chapter 3hm, more charas are introduced...lets see where this is going...good chapter, and now on to the next! |
 Animal luver 2005-09-19 . chapter 2hm, interesting. i feel a little bit sorry for Kagami, but if he's mixed up with Henshi, than maybe its his own fault for concentrating too much on power instead of his god. anyway, good chapter, i'll read more later |
 Animal luver 2005-09-19 . chapter 1oo! creepy, i suppose the he in chapter II is Henshi. interesting story here, on to the next chapter.
(how did i miss so many of your works?? i thought i had read them all. odd...) |
 Jasper Riddle 2004-08-11 . chapter 18VERY GOOD!
I loved this story, and I'm glad that I stayed with it through the entire story. You're right, there IS room for a sequel. This is one of THOSE stories. It's easy to say that this is the end, but if you do a sequel, it either becomes a more enhanced story or a less enhanced one [the sequel's either good or bad].
Keep writing, and if you feel it in your hands, DO THAT SEQUEL!
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 Emmanuel K. Quartey 2004-07-23 . chapter 12There's something bothering me. If you happened to witness the ressurection of a god, would you simply go of to do your job afterwards? I think that bit is unrealistic.
I felt really bad when I read that part about Kagami. To devote all those years of service an dhave it trashed by one act. Depressing. |