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| Tom Madden 2004-06-28 ch 1, | abusenice! ..and great little motivational message before hand. one question though: you said in the summary that each different stanza was teasing from a different popular girl, but I only see the lines all grouped together, no seperate stanzas. it's not a big deal or anything, just an observation. anyway, great job! |
| Xani 2004-06-27 ch 1, | abuseGod I hate bitchy girls! grr..they are more screwed up than the ppl they make fun of, which are usually normal by the way. Anyways, I like this one too. |
| April Hammer 2004-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is a cool poem! :D *add to favs* |