Its admirably apparent that you have put a lot of work into this writing. The idea is poingant yet the begining is a little fast paced and misspelled(though no-less enjoyable). It seemes you have been working on this for a while by the steady improvement in your writing, and I commend you for keeping at it. Enjoyable.

Maybe you could try using lines to separate the different parts of the story.

Hey Jade it me I just wanted to say it is great, need to work on the spelling mishaps but I do it to. And watch for accidental erasings there is a big chunk missin from the 11th chapter. See u at school.

I really like the idea you have for this story. I have always like WWII stories, and I think that this one is one of the best, incorperating elves into it.

Interesting! A very good twist of Hitler's camps with fantasy! Very creative!

Awesome story so far... I am sorta >< At it but the format and everything is good... YOu words things well.

You've read the Dan Brown books? Did you like them? Very good chapter: it was so funny that the demons called the archangel Michael Mikey! Update soon!

Hehe, Ash sounded like a kender during the first part of the chapter! I hope poor Alvar finds out that Anna is fine soon.

I'm really glad you told more about Emily, and the state of the world. This chapter was very informative.

A part at the end of this chapter seemed to be missing. It goes from "They dresses they" to "And you can call me Lina..." without anything in between. How come Paris is in ruins?

Poor Alvar! Again, my only complaint is that the chapters are so short.

Poor, poor elves. That is so sad. I look forward to seeing what will happen next.

Aww, that's so sad! Interesting to find out that Satan isn't fully demon! Someone have some insecurity problems, perhaps?

Hmm, a half-sphinx/half-hippogriff? Soudns interesting. She could be a formidable companion!

Ag, a cliffie! Very good, though short again. I hope to find out more about everyones' histories soon.