|Reviews for Imperfect|
| vionny-san 8/20/04 . chapter 1
i loved this poem cos it was very eerie and dark and very sad in a nice sorta way. keep on updating !
| negligible fictional force 6/30/04 . chapter 1
i like this too!
and nice and dark and eerie too.
*throws confetti around*
| sine 6/28/04 . chapter 1
hey- brilliant imagery here! a bit macabre, but not too much. I cannot stop thinking about the imagery. GREAT IMAGERY!
| A M A 6/26/04 . chapter 1
I like this poem. Its dark and gloomy and sad but speaks of freedom and peace and release.
As you said, "Mist surrounds the future". Does this mean you're unsure of your own future? Don't worry, you're still young.
Keep up the good work