please update...i wanna read more...*gives cookies*

please please update
its bee way way way to long...PLease
i'll give ya a cookie

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
IT'S A GREAT STORY...I WANNA READ MORE!

pleaz update

Oh wow...continue please...This is interesting...though, i'm not used to the lemon but who cares? this story is good so i would like to read more of it...update soon please...

You're writing has really improved since the beginning of this story. The plot is interesting and the characters are well developed. You might want to rdeo the first few chapters. The flow is off, there are a lot of typos and the page formatting is difficut to read. But these newer chapters are really great and I look forward to the next chapter. ^_^

You need to learn about descreetly talking about your characters appearences through the story rather than in a block. If you do it all at once, it's very amuture.Eg.1. "Hey." He said, brushing his black hair out of his eyes.

2. Her bright blue eyes met his, something mischeivous catching between them. Time was almost up.

I like it, there were a few spelling errors but there's nothing wrong with that. I happen to be a slight Korn fan, I'm not as obsessive about them as I tend to e about other bands.

i really like it i can't wait to read next chapters so hurry up ;-)

wow! I don't know what to make of the couples anymore. If Sky is mentioned with Lewis, i think they would make a pretty okay couple because Sky sounds very cute. But, when I hear Dean and Lewis, I want them to be together. I can't believe Lewis... does he really really love Sky or is he trying to convince himself that he doesn't want Dean anymore? I can't help but feel sorry for Sky. And a cliffy! this is nerve wrecking but I love it!! So please update!

*Gasp* An update!( reads )...Oh, the plot is qetting heated, will there be a confrontation? And, just wondering, wouldn`t Dean be bi? I mean, he likes girls too, doesn`t he? Just wanting to clear that out. And, of coarse, update soon, please!

Trust me I am approaching with caution! I can't believe you left us with a cliff hangar! You have to update ASAP!seductivedevil

thank god hes getting there! but im happy tht lewis has sky they're cute lol! i still wunna beat dean upside the head tho LOL! good chappie keep it coming!

No, I'm still going to edit the lemons. It's part of what you write, and I can take it! I mean, I'm going to read it anyway, when you post it. I'll get over editing it! And yes, I like Sky...or maybe it was because he has blue hair when we first meet him? I don't know, but I like him.

curse you Sky..no no no actually it wasn't his fault. curse you Dean..wait no it's not his fault the way he was brought up.argh I don't know who to blame, maybe no one or maybe the dad.. hm.. Man, this is really driving me insane. Poor Dean- Lewis is having sex with another guy. Poor Lewis- can't do anything about his crush. Poor Sky- he's all caught up in the middle. heh heh.. can't wait to find out what happens so please update asap!! much cookies!!

Yes poor Dean :o(- argh see what happens Dean when you ignore some stuff? *cry Stupid skylar evil mumble mumble...sorry just had to let that out.. See this story line make me want to continue reading and so I will- really cool!!