this was very intresting. i liked it even the ending...i have one almost like it...except longer and it happens to me...yea...great poem

I can totally identify with the feeling of resentment that permeates your poem. It's never easy to be overlooked, and sometimes you become so obsessed with an image or a person, you can't help but want to tear it down. The twist is very potent, and the title fits seamlessly. Good job. :)

*claps* this is really incredible...short...but...amazing, nonetheless

Woah...creepy. That was excellent work. Keep it up!