Yeah, kinda all over the place in a very "It's so cool, you don't even know it's cool" way, but then again, I get that from most modern poetry. (Maybe it's just me). I dunno *sigh* but keep going!
-Ben

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*glomphugs you* CLICHE!! LOVE IT!! XDXD SO many phrases in this that are wonderful effects of rambling..."all that jazz"..."this is all **"...etc.