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| pink morbid panda 2006-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI totally adored this, it reminds me of me. I feel for you, I have a crush on my teacher too, it's normal. Why should we all be separated, we're all people for crying out loud!I just don't get it...anyway, write on! |
| lovelikeamixtape 2005-05-14 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if it's cheating to somewhat review your emotions more than your writing, lol. But oh well. A crush on a teacher.. is not a good thing to have. First of all, if they felt the same way, which they most likely don't, it would be illegal- at least, it would be if they did anything about it. And second of all.. you have to accept that nothing is ever going to come of the crush. You need to find someone your own age. Sorry to be so brutal, but it's the blunt truth and you need to hear it from someone. Now.. actually regarding your writing, lol. I really like your honesty. If I wrote a piece like this, I would probably have trouble being so honest, but you don't seem to. I also like how you acknowledge that he has helped you in some ways (second to last paragraph) instead of just wallowing over how you love him and he'll never love you, etc. That makes it well-balanced emotionally and it's an admirable trait. Overall.. good work. |
| Budgiebird 2005-02-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseI feel ya, babe. Nice to know I'm not the only one out there. |
| DaDel Amor 2004-12-20 ch 1, | abuseWow that was deep. I don't think I ever had a crush on a teacher before. |
| annonymous 2004-09-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have felt this way about my teacher as well. He was an inspiration to me in so many ways, and I would not be the person I am today if he had been my teacher. We became friends after I graduated highschool, and I still speak to him on occasion. It is wonderful to have your life touched by people like that, so grab onto those memories and never let them go, even if it hurts sometimes! Thanks for sharing your story. |
| sleeplessdreamer42 2004-06-30 ch 2, | abuseOh, this is sad... I can totally feel with you. i was, well am in love with a teacher, too. Only that i once really told him (with my name) but luckily, he wasn`t my teacher by then anymore. I haven't seen him inlike forever and miss him like hell... so I can imagine your feelings :) Anika |
| Punkthic13 2004-06-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou had a crush on your teacher? Well, I have a crush on my best friend, so I guess we're even |
| glowstar75 2004-06-29 ch 2, anon. | abusethe stories great, and i feel so emotional right now. Just one question, how old is the "character" in the story? |
| oddlyintrospective 2004-06-29 ch 2, | abuseYes, I'm reviewing again! lol. I like this *story* and I think it's pretty cool to post a jounal-ish thing as a story-ish thing. It's new anyway, new meaning I haven't seen any others to date. But it's quite possible I'm wrong. Anyway, I like it. And as you said, keep writing!(even if t isn't for 2 months) Good job! :) XD |
| oddlyintrospective 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI have felt that about a teacher as well... It was just this year too. I've changed so many ways thanks to him. He was my history/geography/music teacher and he was amazing. Thing is though, he's leaving. He's going to another school. When I found that out, apparently he had announced it at his final concert with the school and I wasn't there. My friends told me on e-mail and I cried. It hurt more than anything you can imagine. I gave him a poem. You can read it on my accout here on fictionpress(the music in all). Please do. I say don't be embarrassed or shy about what you did. Just remember, it will end, it won't last forever and he is probably going to move on in his own life. You're 16, you have your whole life ahead of you. He does sound wonderful. I know my teacher was. But now I'm over it. I know he will always be with me, just not the same. He won't be my love, but he'll be part of my life. After all, I have my life ahead of me too. I'm 4 years younger than you. The way you wrote the story though... It was from the heart. Please continue writing. I loved it. |
| Renee Clarke 2004-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this story because I have had similar feelings to what it is expressing. It is nice to know that others feel this way- The feeling of never being able to get what you want because deep down you know it will never and shouldn't happen. |
2004-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abusei know exactly how a broken heart feels, relizing he wilol never love you the way you love him. i know exactly how that feels... |
| Buddy 2004-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! I know exactly what you mean. OBSESSION IS BAD. But you can't help it. |
| WarriorHeart 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseIt sounds like you like who you think he is rather than who he actually is. I hope your heart heals fast, nonetheless. |