dont insult my girlfriend!! her name is reda

I like!
It is SO beyond cool, because Kiley's best friend has the same name as me! Hooray!
Ya, so I'm a LITTLE high at the moment.
ANYWAY! I like much, waiting on the edge of my seat for more! Is she gonna bust Caed's face in? Where'd he get a name like Caed? It's a cool name. Sounds almost Scottish! Am I right? Are you from SCOTLAND? Ok, RANDOM. Can you tell that I am VERY hyper?!?!
ANYWAY! I like it much! You, my friend, are going on my Author Alert List!
Your Fan,
Kaye90
P.S. UPDATE!

I really like the contrast between the chapters, from some scene of oblivion to a more personal tone. From the first chapter it sounds very interesting and the second adds a bit of mystery.

Wow... I want s'more. I need to know what happened... -_-

very well written, I like the tie-in with the hard had, very good way to indicate it was him. well tied together, and you left enough of it unsaid. was the premise inspired by 9-11? anyway, good fic.