That's sweet. I love your rhythm, and the descriptions, it really called up a vivid picture in my mind. I t mad eme feel like I was a kid again, and believed in fairies. This was just beautifully written, with not a word out of place. Thank you for sharing it!
P.S Thanks for your reviews- yes, I am english. I agree with you about americanised hobbits- they somehow loose that slight sense of- I don't know what- that keeps Hobbits from being *too* sweet. I'm glad you liked my story!