hey, wow i'm the first to review! it's really good, i like the rhyme sceme that you used. in my opinion i think that God does like to hear the things that He already knows, what else would we talk to Him about, He knows everything! once again very nice and well written. ~Bandbingo~

Interesting and wonderfully different subject for a poem! The form and rhyming schema are spot on throughout which is a tremendous credit to your writing abilities from a technical point of view. You've even managed to get the punctuation right (something I moan about too much). There really isn't anything I can fault here. I really do like this! Great stuff.