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| Dumon 2004-09-13 ch 1,   | This is very beautifully written. with thoughtand feeling. Superb in it's meaning. Thank you for r/r Voluptuous. IT was inspired by Music and Dance, which i can't do either of. You have a spiffing poem, I'll read your other ones later today. Kudos Dumon |
| cinderella-ashes 2004-06-27 ch 1, | overall, it's very nice, i can relate somewhat, i've had that type of person in my life...just one point, your middle doesn't rhyme, but your ends do, it makes the flow just a little choppy...thanks for the reviews you've given me by the way |
| Mrs. O 2004-06-26 ch 1, | wow...very descriptive i like it! keep writing! ~ABC-Angel~ |