It flows nicely; I really like your word choice.

wow... um that poem really hit home for me... *boyfriend of year and half dumps me and two weeks later has another g/f*
just wanted to let you know that your writing has touched someone's heart...

Great job...I can really relate to this. I like the emotions you convey; it's a very powerful piece. Thanks bunches for the review. Great job; keep writing.

*tear* That's so sweet my pammy! Who did this to you, who made you insignificant? I'll og kick them in the face! Love the poem by the way!

I really feel for you through this poem. It conveys your message very well and you can feel the emotions clearly. good job!
-ally-
(cocacola_chick4eva@hotmail.com)

Oh how well you described the pain I have felt before.
Beautifully written and thoroughly enjoyed
Odyssey2469

i liked this. it was very different and unique. well done