have you seen people these days, flaunting their ‘difference’ like it was a bloody gold medal? Give me a ** break.

Wow... you express my thoughts on the matter precisely. How can people say they want to "be themselves" by concsciously trying to be different. So what if you like the same music as everyone else, or if you don't? Does it really matter?

This story is amazing. It's one of the most beautiful I've ever read. Your phrasing is fantastic, and it's a really fresh plot idea. WOW! You are awesome! I love you. I fell in love with Arthur just a little bit too.

I know exactly what you mean when you say you get inspiration from some wierd places. I think that if someone were to give me any item at all froma piece of dirt to a diamond, I could figure out something to write about it. As far as this letter goes, I really do like the ending, it would have nice though if you had given some clues throughout the letter. Stuff that leads the reader to think that maybe Sara has moved away and then in the end you find out she died. Mainly I suggest this because I like it when I "figure out" what is coming before it happens. Maybe you did put some clues in and I read too fast to see them. Oh well, I love it, but I'm wondering is Sara a friend or like a sister or something, because you leave that pretty vauge and this thing is full of surprises.
P.S. ** Cyra I hate chicks like her...

goddamn GREAT! please make it longer if you're inspired to.

It is said that the more your reader can connect with the story the more apt they are to enjoy it. This is usually done by just having the main character be the "under-dog" but you did it differently, you actually made real situations and had specific things that people to relate to (I for one related to the music and other peoples lack of apreciation for somones [my] feelings while they [I] are [am] pretty much spliting a vein and pouring everthing inside them out.)
It was definately short though and I found a lot of the sentences to be mostly blank filler with the occasional diamond. My personal input is to try and spruce up some of the more dull lines.
Thats all folks!