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W. Incognito 2008-02-23 ch 40,	I hope you don't mind that I've added your story to my C2 for fairy tales :) it was recommended to me by a friend (Written, here on FP), and I loved it! Great work.
DeadlyWhisper 2008-02-09 ch 40,	Wow...just wow, when Written recommended this story 2 me i didnt realise just how brilliant it would be! It's such a feel good story that has an ending that is so fullfilling for a hopeless romantic like me, lol :) I really like how you developed the relationship between James and Nerissa! I hope you get more reviews for your story coz i know they're important for writers and u definitely deserve them for this!
Written 2008-02-04 ch 40,	absolutely wonderful. great job and congratulations on an awesome finished work. I enjoyed every single bit!
Written 2008-02-04 ch 39,	aaw. so close to the end! I'm really sad; I loved this story. But maybe james is right, it was about god damned time.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 36,	[“Why would I be leading you into a trap?” This seemed to genuinely puzzle Gilroy, as though there really were no reason for him to be on Douglass’s side.] OH man. I seriously giggled for quite a while after reading that. This story is too cute. Though now that I put it that way, it sounds absolutely condescending. That's not how I mean. I wonder a little, however, why Malcolm didn't tell them what the device was? I'm sure it'll all work out in the end anyway. I also love how you have, in previous chapters, 'explained' the fairies, and shown that they are not different from humans aside from in mindset. It's really quite brilliant, and I'm surprised to find such a well thought out story on this site. I want this printed and bound on my bookshelf. Seriously.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 34,	aha. douglass loses face (sort of) in front of his peers. perfect.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 28,	jessica died by, apparently, her own hand? suicide... interesting. As always, your writing is wonderful. I'm absolutely thrilled by this story.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 27,	Oh my. I'm not sure what to think of the millers, but things are getting interesting.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 21,	aww. the burial place secret isn't lame. . . or I'm too lame to come up with a better suggestion.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 14,	Aw. James and Nerissa are oddly very cute. I liked that Nerissa was quick to catch on that James was lying to her.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 13,	just awesome! I love the deception going on.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 8,	I love the way that the magops seem to logic things out, and I like that you can put magic and engineering in the same sentence. you've introduced tons of characters, but they are all memorable in their own ways, which is fantastic.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 7,	okay, kenneth was obviously nerissa, but how did one of the guys see through her disguise? hm.
Written 2008-02-04 ch 6,	I'll write this review as I read... Wow, two years without rain! Fairies are not the type of 'people' to mess with. [“I don’t know; I think my mother tried to sell them perfume once?” Malcolm’s origins were entirely obscure, but his father was either a spy for the Queen or a doctor, and his mother took on any number of fairly dramatic and exciting roles depending on Malcolm’s mood and what was convenient.] Best ever. I just love it. Aha. . . kenneth miller? is he Nerissa? Oh, I see that he's either a girl dressed up as a boy or a male fairy. . . yep, probably Nerissa. fascinating story so far. I've definitely added it to my favorite stories list. I can't wait to read the rest!
Written 2008-02-04 ch 2,	gorgeous story, I can't wait to read more!

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