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| Misplaced Angel 2007-11-24 ch 4,  | abuseis there any chance you might be updating this story any time soon? because it has a good begining and it has great potential. just thought i'd say that. |
| MelGrl 2007-08-08 ch 4, | abuseI hope you will update soon. Please do, I find this story very interesting. |
| Genato 2007-06-11 ch 4, | abusepfft... you shouldn't have written anything at all! AT ALL! hehe. joke. at least it's better than nothing.. i think. but it's good. |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-18 ch 3, | abuseHaha. I like this. It's written really well. |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-18 ch 2, | abuseSeems like you know a lot about airplanes and landing and stuff. Cool. I like this story. Haha. Still can't get over the blue hair. |
| Da Vinci at Work 2006-11-18 ch 1, | abuseBlue hair? Haha. The mob. Nice. This seems quite promising. |
| Blink 2006-11-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseis this good or what! i can't wait for the next chapter to come up, i was really disappointed that this is going through an indefinate hiatus. pLeAsE UnDaTe SoOn. |
| xPink Blossomsx 2006-08-18 ch 4, | abusePls update! I really like the plot of the story! :D Good job ^^ |
| BITT3RSW33T 2006-08-06 ch 4, | abuseno i'm melting! lol, ok that was a TAD bit dramatic, but really... I was SO looking forward to them living together! MAN! lol,well i hope you find your inspiration. soon. |
| Cole Perry 2006-06-22 ch 4, | abusethats a shame well write more soonC.P. |
| XLoveToHateX 2006-06-22 ch 4, | abuseup the hell date! |
| Hennessy 2006-01-20 ch 4, | abusewhat do you mean by can't find any motivation for a story like this? An indefinite hiatus? Do you want me to faint? Allow me to. Falls in cattle dung. Okay, now that's just nasty. Please, please continue this! Please don't leave it in a lurch like that! Please don't drop it like that! Please! I'm on my knees!...you want some cheese?... Ignore that. What I really want to say is...well, if you don't have the motivation then might as well you just delete it but if you at least have a 'glimmer' of motivation work on it. Don't worry. It might take months but it'll come true. So please update when that 'glimmer' of motivation turns into a distinguishable 'puddle' of motivation. ~Orange Orchids |
| peace etc 2006-01-20 ch 4, | abuseaw... I loved this story! |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-12-22 ch 3, | abuseO Nice story.. I love it.. I used to have purple hair.. I miss it now.. :( |
| Slightly Obsessive 2005-12-13 ch 3, | abuseNot bad, not bad at all. I like what you've written so far. Please continue. The banter between Roth and Alexa is very amusing BTW. |